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Jardine Scholarship Application Experience
What is the Jardine Scholarship? For scholarships, I’m sure we’ve all heard of the big names like Bank Negara, Petronas and Khazanah which sponsor many students every year to further their studies overseas. But for students applying to Oxbridge, the lesser-known Jardine Scholarship should be on their radar.
The Jardine Scholarship is a bond-free scholarship offered by Jardine Matheson, a Hong Kong-based conglomerate with a presence across Asia Pacific (they own Giant, Guardian and Mercedes Benz dealerships here). The scholarship will cover your tuition fees, a stipend for living costs and one return flight to the UK. Additionally, you’ll be connected with a huge network of Jardine scholars across Asia.
It is important to note that only students applying to the University of Oxford and University of Cambridge are eligible for the scholarship, and even then you’d have to apply to specific colleges in each university (Queen’s, Exeter, Oriel and Trinity for Oxford and Downing, Magdalene, Peterhouse and Trinity for Cambridge). Back then when I was looking around for scholarships, I myself wasn’t aware of Jardine. I was really lucky to have chosen Queen’s (based on reasons unrelated to the scholarship), and they emailed to inform me that I was eligible to apply for the scholarship since I’m Malaysian.
Application
Stage 1: Online Form and Personal Statement Another difference between Jardine and the major scholarships in Malaysia are the application timeframe. Applications for Jardine open around August and close mid-October (21 October for this year’s cycle), which coincides with the UCAS application timeline for Oxbridge applicants. I found that finishing my UCAS early was super helpful as it gave me ample time to prepare my scholarship application. The application form is quite standard. You would have to apply through their website, and fill in an online form which would ask you for some personal and academic information. However, Jardine also asks for a personal statement, which is different from the UCAS personal statement. The personal statement should focus on your aspirations and future plans, as well as highlight your extra-curricular activities and engagement with your community. If you’re confused about what to write, I’d highly recommend just taking some time to think about your objectives in the years to come, and how studying your course can help you towards those goals. It sounds daunting but don’t worry! You can always talk to your friends or school counsellor for input. Additionally, your teacher (or even principal or counsellor) will have to provide a reference to support your scholarship application, very much like for UCAS. Jardine would give information on what the reference should include, so do communicate that to your referee.
Once all this is done, you’ll have to submit your application form and complete the first stage!
Stage 2: Automated Video Interview If your application has been shortlisted, you’ll receive an email from Jardine inviting you to complete a video interview. But this isn’t going to be a typical Zoom call. I was surprised to find out that it was an AUTOMATED video interview that could be completed any time before a specified deadline. Here’s how it works:
- You’d log into a website
- You’ll be given clear instructions on how to answer the questions, and you’ll be allowed to test out your microphone and webcam and familiarise yourself with the software by answering a few sample questions (which won’t come out in the interview).
- Once you’re ready, you’ll press start. Each question will be displayed for a limited time, and then your webcam and mic will start recording to capture your answers, also for a limited time (I think around a minute or two).
- After all the questions are completed, the video interview is sent to Jardine to be reviewed.
I was super scared at this stage for I’ve never done anything like it before. The time limit means you have very little room for error in answering questions. But after I finished it, I thought it wasn’t too bad. The questions they asked were quite straightforward (a few about where you think you’d be in the future), and you will be given sufficient time to answer. General advice for interviews would apply here, but I’d also like to offer a few extra for this automated version:
- Dress well! Even though you’re doing the interview remotely (probably at home), you should still dress presentably as Jardine will be watching the video recording. Doesn’t have to be too fancy. A collared shirt will work fine.
- Make sure your internet connection is stable. You don’t want to risk your connection being cut off mid-interview, triggering a wave of panic.
- Be mindful of the time you’re given. I sometimes found myself rambling when I was answering the questions, only to have to rush to a conclusion when I see that there’s 10 seconds left. Remember to look at the timer and make sure you get your point across before time runs out. This really is easier said than done based on my experience, but practicing under timed conditions could help.
- Test your mic and webcam. I assumed they would be fine but tested them anyway, only to realise that my mic was way too loud. You can adjust it so that it’s at a comfortable volume for the people who will be watching the video recording.
Stage 3: Final Interview in Hong Kong If you’ve made it to this stage, congratulations! You’ve been picked among many applicants for the best part of the application process: a trip to Hong Kong for the final interview, all paid for by Jardine. The final interview is usually held in early January, and it is a must to go to Hong Kong or else your application will no longer be considered. Jardine is generous enough to pay for your return air ticket, your accommodation at a nice hotel owned by them (usually The Excelsior but it has closed down), your transport between Hong Kong airport and the hotel and a buffet dinner with other applicants. Since this is the last stage of the application, you will be going up against a panel of 6 for your interview. I was immediately terrified after realising that fact, and more so when I looked up the panelists and found out that 3 of them were the heads of Oxbridge colleges. The provost (equivalent to principal) of my college was not there, but I know applicants who were interviewed by the principal of their college. However, the interviewers were all super kind and friendly, and will try to make you feel comfortable. I was asked to fly to Hong Kong the day before my interview. When I arrived, I was brought to the hotel and checked into my room. Jardine makes you share a room, which is great because you’ll get to meet someone who’s likely from a different country in Asia. If you arrive before dinner time, you’ll have liberty to explore the city a bit. The Excelsior was very centrally located in Causeway Bay so there was easy access to shopping and soaking in the city atmosphere. Jardine will organise a buffet dinner at the hotel for all the scholarship applicants. This was a very nice time to get to know other people who may be headed to the same university or college as you. Though we were competing against each other for the scholarship, there was never a sense of tension or competitiveness. Everyone I met was friendly, and the conversations were super chill and informal. After you enjoy a night of sleep (please do get enough rest!), it’s time to face the interview. I woke up early so that I’d have enough time to take a shower and put on my suit (dress code for the interview is formal), then headed down for breakfast. If you’re feeling nervous, you’re not alone. Everyone else is feeling the same way, and just chatting with them at breakfast can help ease some of the nerves. After eating, you’ll have to arrange your own transport to Jardine’s office, Jardine House. All of us decided to take a cab there, splitting ourselves into small groups. The first stage of the final interview is an essay. I was given about half an hour to write about a specified topic, and Jardine allowed us to use our phone or laptop to do research. I think the point of the essay is to see how you structure your arguments in a short time, and my response in my essay would be later brought up during the interview. The interview itself would also last about half an hour. You’ll have to wait for your turn depending on what time slot you get, during which us applicants who were waiting mostly talked. Those who had already finished their interviews would tell us about the experience, which made for interesting conversation but also made me more nervous.
When it came to my turn, I waited outside the interview room to be called in. The interview itself centered around your aspirations and future plans with some related critical thinking questions thrown in. They asked me about things I wrote in my Jardine personal statement, as well as the essay I wrote in the morning. Do also make sure you have a clear idea of your goals and plans, as well as your reasons for pursuing those ends as they will likely ask you about that. There’s no definite answer they’re looking for with these questions, but a piece of advice I would give is to stay composed in answering their questions. It’s alright to take a few seconds to think and organise your thoughts before you answer, rather than ramble on nervously without making your point clear. I was asked a question that I had no idea how to answer, but tried my best to present my view along with some justification. It turned out to be a bad answer, but the panelist who asked the question was super nice in sharing her thoughts with me. I listened and then asked her more questions about her views, which I think is good because it exhibits to them that you’re eager to learn. It’s very rare to be able to have a conversation with these people who have had such illustrious careers, so do seize the opportunity to talk to them and learn from them! As my interview was completed, I felt relieved. It had been a rigorous process, and now I was almost at the end. The last part of the interview process is a lunch with the panelists, which some believe is also a part of the assessment. There are rumours that the lunch is a test of your etiquette, and how you present yourself during a meal. Hearing these rumours and not wanting to take any chances, I watched videos on table etiquette to make sure I was prepared. But in retrospect, it shouldn’t be something to stress over. Obviously, you would have to exhibit a basic level of table manners (which should hopefully be something you already adopt), but I wouldn’t stress too much about more minute details like how to eat a grape. Fun (but probably useless) fact: the table etiquette video said to poke the grape with your fork, take it from the fork with your fingers, then put it in your mouth. I would say that the lunch is more a test of conversation as you will be seated near the panelists (according to a seating chart) and have to talk to them. I sat next to the chair of the scholarship committee, and talked to him about Malaysia and Oxford. I remember having to talk a lot, and since I didn’t want to talk with food in my mouth, I ended up barely eating. But I really enjoyed my conversations with the panelists and fellow applicants near me, so I thought it was a worthy sacrifice (and I could always grab a bite after). Once lunch ends, you’re free to go if you’ve already done your interview! At this point, I said goodbye and good luck to the other applicants, and went to explore Hong Kong a bit more before my flight home. About two weeks later, I got an email from Jardine offering me the scholarship, and happily celebrated the achievement. For my year, two Malaysians got the scholarship, but there is no fixed number of scholarships as there have been years where only one or no Malaysians have gotten it.
The best part of this scholarship is that it’s bond-free. You will be fully-funded to study your course of choice at Oxbridge, but can freely choose what you want to do after you graduate. The people at Jardine are also super supportive of your career development, and will readily provide you with career advice and internship opportunities. Additionally, I found the application process to be an amazing experience, especially the final interview. Rarely does a company give you a free trip overseas as part of a scholarship application, and the experience was made all the more special by the wonderful people I met. The Jardine scholars are also a tight knit community, so expect dinners and events together once you’re in Oxford or Cambridge. If you’re applying to Oxbridge, I’d highly recommend applying for this scholarship. Many Malaysian students don’t know about the opportunity, but I hope more of us can benefit from this generous scheme and fulfill their dreams of studying at Oxbridge.
As Covid-19 continues to upend life globally, it is possible that Jardine might switch to a fully online assessment of scholarship applicants, which means shortlisted candidates will no longer have to fly to Hong Kong. Though the interviews this year might have a different format from before, I do hope you still find this article useful in demystifying the application process. Good luck for your application!
Chee Gee Ren is a Jardine Scholar currently reading Philosophy, Politics and Economics at Queen’s College, Oxford. He loves to cook and first year at Oxford taught him it’s possible to cook rendang using a rice cooker. If you intend to contact the author, feel free to contact the CollegeLAH Team at [email protected] .
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How to Write a Personal Statement for a Scholarship + Examples
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Either before or after you’ve gotten into your dream school, you’ll have to figure out how to pay for it. For most students, this involves a combination of financial aid, parent contributions, self-contributions, student loans, and scholarships/grants. Because scholarships are money out of someone else’s pocket that you never have to pay back, they are a great place to start!
Scholarships come in two forms: merit-based and need-based. Need-based scholarships are also often called grants. These designations tell you whether an organization looks at your financial situation when deciding about your scholarship.
Additionally, different scholarships fall under different categories based on the mission of the organization or person providing the scholarship’s financing. These missions typically emphasize different things like academic achievement, specific career goals, community service, leadership, family background, skill in the arts, or having overcome hardship. As you select scholarships to apply for and complete your applications, you should keep these missions in mind.
No matter what type of scholarship you are applying for, you will be asked to provide the review committee with standard materials. This includes your transcript, GPA, and resume/extracurriculars, but also, importantly, your personal statement. A scholarship personal statement is a bit different from your normal college essay, so we’ve put together this guide and some examples to help you get started!
The purpose of your personal statement is to help a review committee learn more about your personality, values, goals, and what makes you special. Ultimately, like with your college essays, you are trying to humanize your profile beyond your transcript, GPA, and test scores.
College essays all have one goal in mind (which is why you can apply to multiple schools at once through applications like the Common App or Coalition App): convince admissions officers that you would be a valuable addition to the university environment. The goal of your scholarship personal statement is different and differs more from one scholarship to the next. Rather than convincing various review committees that you are a generally good candidate for extra funding for college, you need to convince each review committee that your values have historically aligned with their organization’s mission and will continue to align with their organization’s mission.
Common missions amongst those who give scholarships include:
- Providing opportunities for students with career ambitions in a particular field
- Helping students who have experienced unexpected hardship
- Supporting students who show outstanding academic achievement
- Funding the arts through investing in young artists with strong technical skill
- Supporting the development of civic-minded community service leaders of the future
- Providing opportunities for historically underrepresented ethnic communities
If a specific mission like this is outlined on an organization’s website or in the promotional material for its scholarship, the purpose of your personal statement is to show how you exemplify that mission.
Some scholarships ask for your personal statement to be guided by a prompt, while others leave things open for interpretation. When you are provided a prompt, it is obvious what you must do: answer the prompt. When you are not provided a prompt, you want to write a personal statement that is essentially a small-scale autobiography where you position yourself as a good investment. In either case, you should identify a focus or theme for what you are trying to say about yourself so that your application does not get lost in the shuffle.
Prompts include questions like:
- Why do you deserve this scholarship?
- How have you shown your commitment to (leadership/community service/diversity) in your community?
- When did you overcome adversity?
- Why is attending college important to you?
If you are provided a prompt, develop a theme for your response that showcases both your values and your achievements. This will help your essay feel focused and will subsequently help the review committee to remember which candidate you were as they deliberate.
Themes include things like:
- I deserve this community service scholarship because my compassion for intergenerational trauma has inspired me to volunteer with a local after-school program. I didn’t just sympathize. I did something about my sympathy because that’s the type of person I am. Within the program, I have identified avenues for improvement and worked alongside full-time staff to develop new strategies for increasing attendance.
- I overcame adversity when my mother had to have a major surgery two months after giving birth to my younger brother. I was just a kid but was thrown into a situation where I had to raise another kid. It was hard, but I’m the kind of person who tries to grow from hard times and, through my experience taking care of a baby, I learned the importance of listening to body language and nonverbal cues to understand the needs of others (baby and nonbaby, alike).
Without a prompt, clarity can be harder to achieve. That said, it is of the utmost importance that you find a focus. First, think about both your goals and your values.
Types of goals include:
- Career goals
- Goals for personal growth
- The type of friend you want to be
- The change you want to make in the world
Values could include:
- Authenticity
- And many more!
After you write out your goals/values, write out your achievements to see what goals/values you have “proof” of your commitment to. Your essay will ultimately be an exploration of your goal/value, what you have done about your goal/value in the past, and what you aspire to in the future.
You might be tempted to reflect on areas for improvement, but scholarships care about you living out your values. It is not enough to aspire to be exemplary in leadership, community service, or your academic field. For scholarships, you have to already be exemplary.
Finally, keep in mind that the review committee likely already has a copy of your extracurricular activities and involvement. Pick one or two accomplishments, then strive for depth, not breadth as you explore them.
My interest in the field of neuroscience began at a young age. When I was twelve years old, my sister developed a condition called Pseudotumor Cerebri following multiple concussions during a basketball game. It took the doctors over six months to make a proper diagnosis, followed by three years of treatment before she recovered. During this time, my love for neuroscience was sparked as I began to research her condition and, then, other neurocognitive conditions. Later, my love of neuroscience was amplified when my mother began to suffer from brain-related health issues. My mother had been a practicing attorney in Dallas for over twenty years. She was a determined litigator who relentlessly tried difficult cases that changed people’s lives. Now, she suffers from a cognitive impairment and is no longer able to practice law. Oftentimes, she has headaches, she gets “cloudy,” her executive functioning slows down, she feels overwhelmed, and she forgets things. My mother has gone from being the strong, confident, emotional and financial caretaker of our family to needing significant help on a daily basis. Once again, with this illness came a lot of research on my part — research that encouraged me to pursue my dreams of exploring neuroscience.
Due to my experiences with my mother and sister when I was in middle school, I knew that I wanted to make a difference in the field of neuroscience. I also knew that, to obtain this goal, I needed to maintain superior grades in school while also pursuing opportunities outside of school to further my education. In school, I was able to maintain superior grades to the point where I am currently valedictorian in a class of 567 students. In addition, in school, I challenged myself by taking 16 Advanced Placement classes and 19 Honors classes. Two of the most beneficial classes were AP Capstone Seminar and AP Capstone Research. AP Capstone Seminar and AP Capstone Research are research-oriented classes where students are given the opportunity to pursue whatever track their research takes them down. As a junior in AP Capstone Seminar, I researched the effects of harmful pesticide use on the prevalence of Autism Spectrum Disorder (ASD) in children. This year, as a senior in AP Capstone Research, I am learning about the effects of medical marijuana on the treatment of Multiple Sclerosis (MS).
Outside of school, I furthered my education through taking advantage of the Duke TiP summer program. Duke TiP is a summer program run by Duke University where students who score extremely well on the SAT as middle schoolers are able to take college classes at different universities throughout the summers of their middle school and high school years. I took advantage of this opportunity twice. First, I went to Trinity University in San Antonio to expand my horizons and learn more about debate. However, once I was done exploring, I decided I wanted to go into neuroscience. This led me to take an Abnormal Psychology class at Duke University’s West Campus. This class opened my eyes to the interaction between neuroscience and mental health, mental illness, and personality. Years later, I am currently continuing my education outside of school as an intern at the University of Texas Dallas Center for Brain Health. Through this internship, I have been able to see different aspects of neuroscience including brain pattern testing, virtual reality therapy, and longitudinal research studies. With this background, I have positioned myself to be accepted by top neuroscience programs throughout the nation. So far, I have been accepted to the neuroscience department of University of Southern California, the University of Virginia, the University of Texas, and Southern Methodist University, as well as the chemistry department at University of North Carolina–Chapel Hill.
It is with this passion for neuroscience driven by my family and passion for education driven by internal motivation that I will set out to conquer my career objectives. My educational aspirations consist of acquiring a bachelor’s degree in a biological or health science that would assist me in pursuing a medical career as a neuroscience researcher. I decided to attain a career as a researcher since my passion has always been assisting others and trying to improve their quality of life. After obtaining my Masters and my PhD, I plan to become a professor at a prestigious university and continue performing lab research on cognitive disorders. I am particularly interested in disorders such as Autism Spectrum Disorder (ASD). In the lab, I hope to find different therapies and medications to help treat the 3.5 million people around the world suffering from ASD. Furthermore, I want to contribute back to underserved populations that struggle because they do not have as much access to medical assistance as other privileged groups. As such, I hope to do a part of my research in less developed or developing Spanish-speaking countries. This will also allow me to pursue my love of Spanish while pursuing my love of neuroscience. I think that following such a career path will provide me the opportunity to learn about the medical needs of the autistic community and improve their quality of health. Furthermore, I hope to train a new generation of students to strive to research and make comparable discoveries. Whether it be through virtual reality labs or new drug discoveries, I believe that research leads to innovation which leads to a brighter future.
This student does a great job of making themself appear competent and dedicated to the field of neuroscience. This is primarily because they provided tangible evidence of how they have pursued their dedication in the past—through their AP Capstone courses, their Abnormal Psychology class at Duke TiP, and their internship at UTD. There is no doubt in the mind of a reader that this student is high-achieving.
This student also engages successfully with a past-future trajectory, where they end with a vision of how they will continue to use neuroscience in the future. This helps the review committee see what they are investing in and the ways that their money will go to good use.
This student has two major areas for improvement. As we have said, the purpose of a personal statement is for a student to humanize themself to a review committee. This student struggles to depict themself separately from their academic achievements. A solution to this would be for the student to establish a theme towards the beginning of their essay that relates to both their values as a human and their achievements.
At the beginning of the essay, the student explores how their interest in neuroscience began. They explain their interest through the following sentences: “During this time, my love for neuroscience was sparked as I began to research her condition and, then, other neurocognitive conditions” and “Once again, with this illness came a lot of research on my part — research that encouraged me to pursue my dreams of exploring neuroscience.” The student made the great decision to tell the backstory of their interest, but they described their research in very mundane and redundant terms. Instead, they could have focused on their value of intellectual curiosity as a magnetic force that encouraged them to research their mother and sister’s ailments. Curiosity, then, could serve as a value-related thematic throughline to taking AP Capstone classes, taking college courses during the summer that weren’t required, and interning before even graduating high school.
A second area for improvement would be avoiding statistics. As the student identifies their valedictorian status and the number of AP classes they have taken, they might turn away certain personalities on a review committee by appearing braggy. Even further, these statistics are a waste of space. The review committee already has access to this information. These words distract from the major theme of the essay and would have been better used to humanize the student.
Throughout my academic career, I have been an avid scholar, constantly pushing myself towards ambitious goals. I held and continue to hold myself to a high standard, enrolling myself in rigorous curriculum, including Honors and Advanced Placement courses to stretch my mental potential. During my junior year of high school, I took four AP tests, two on the same day, and earned the AP Scholar with Honor Award. Additionally, I received the Letter of Commendation for the PSAT/NMSQT, and qualified for Rotary Top 100 Students both my freshman and senior year, a sign of my commitment to my studies. However, school has not been all about having the best GPA for me; beyond the numbers, I have a deep drive to learn which motivates me to do well academically. I truly enjoy learning new things, whether it be a new essay style or a math theorem. I always give each class my best effort and try my hardest on every assignment. My teachers have noticed this as well, and I have received school Lancer Awards and Student of the Month recognitions as a result. It is a major goal of mine to continue to aspire towards a high level of achievement regarding future educational and occupational endeavors; I plan on continuing this level of dedication throughout my educational career and implementing the skills I have learned and will learn into my college experience and beyond.
This fall, I will begin attending the University of California Los Angeles as an English major. I chose this major because I am fascinated by written language, especially its ability to convey powerful messages and emotions. I also enjoy delving into the works of other authors to analyze specific components of their writing to discover the meaning behind their words. In particular, I cannot wait to begin in-depth literary criticism and learn new stylistic techniques to add more depth to my writing. Furthermore, I recently went to UCLA’s Bruin Day, an event for incoming freshmen, where I was exposed to many different extracurriculars, some of which really piqued my interest. I plan on joining the Writing Success Program, where I can help students receive free writing help, and Mock Trial, where I can debate issues with peers in front of a real judge. The latter, combined with a strong writing background from my undergraduate English studies will be extremely beneficial because I plan to apply to law school after my undergraduate degree. As of now, my career goal is to become a civil rights lawyer, to stand up for those who are discriminated against and protect minority groups to proliferate equality.
As a lawyer, I wish to utilize legislation to ameliorate the plight of the millions of Americans who feel prejudice and help them receive equity in the workplace, society, and so on. Though this seems a daunting task, I feel that my work ethic and past experience will give me the jumpstart I need to establish myself as a successful lawyer and give a voice to those who are often unheard in today’s legal system. I have been a Girl Scout for over a decade and continually participate in community service for the homeless, elderly, veterans, and more. My most recent project was the Gold Award, which I conducted in the Fullerton School District. I facilitated over ten workshops where junior high students taught elementary pupils STEM principles such as density and aerodynamics via creative activities like building aluminum boats and paper airplanes. I also work at Kumon, a tutoring center, where I teach students to advance their academic success. I love my job, and helping students from local schools reach their potential fills me with much pride.
Both being a Girl Scout and working at Kumon have inspired me to help those in need, contributing significantly to my desire to become a lawyer and aid others. My extracurriculars have allowed me to gain a new perspective on both learning and teaching, and have solidified my will to help the less fortunate. In college, I hope to continue to gain knowledge and further develop my leadership skills, amassing qualities that will help me assist others. I plan to join multiple community service clubs, such as UCLA’s local outreach programs that directly aid residents of Los Angeles. I want to help my fellow pupils as well, and plan on volunteering at peer tutoring and peer editing programs on campus. After college, during my career, I want to use legal tactics to assist the underdog and take a chance on those who are often overlooked for opportunities. I wish to represent those that are scared to seek out help or cannot afford it. Rather than battling conflict with additional conflict, I want to implement peaceful but strong, efficient tactics that will help make my state, country, and eventually the world more welcoming to people of all ethnic and socioeconomic backgrounds. These goals are close to my heart and therefore I will be as diligent as I am passionate about them. My perseverance and love for learning and community service drive my ambition in both education and life as a whole, and the drive to make the world a better place is one that I will carry with me for my entire life.
This student emphasizes two values in this essay: hard work and community service. These are values that go together nicely, and definitely make sense with this student’s end goal of becoming a civil rights lawyer! That said, some changes could be made to the way the student presents their values that would make their personal statement more convincing and engaging.
Structurally, instead of using a past-future trajectory, this student starts by explaining their academic achievements, then explains their career goals, then explains their history of community service, then explains their future desires for community service. This structure loses the reader. Instead, the student should have started with either the past or the future.
This could look like 1) identifying their career goals, 2) explaining that hard work and a commitment to community service are necessary to get there, and 3) explaining that they aren’t worried because of their past commitment to hard work and community service. Or it could look like 1) providing examples of their hard work and community service in the past, then 2) explaining how those values will help them achieve their career goals.
Additionally, like with our other example, this student shows a heavy investment in statistics and spouting off accomplishments. This can be unappealing. Unfortunately, even when the student recognizes that they are doing this, writing “beyond the numbers, I have a deep drive to learn which motivates me to do well academically. I truly enjoy learning new things, whether it be a new essay style or a math theorem,” they continue on to cite their achievements, writing “My teachers have noticed this as well, and I have received school Lancer Awards and Student of the Month recognitions as a result.” They say they are going beyond the numbers, but they don’t go beyond the awards. They don’t look inward. One way to fix this would be to make community service the theme around which the essay operates, supplementing with statistics in ways that advance the image of the student as dedicated to community service.
Finally, this student would be more successful if they varied their sentence structure. While a small-scale autobiography can be good, if organized, every sentence should not begin with ‘I.’ The essay still needs to be engaging or the review committee might stop reading.
Feedback is ultimately any writer’s best source of improvement! To get your personal statement edited for free, use our Peer Review Essay Tool . With this tool, other students can tell you if your scholarship essay is effective and help you improve your essay so that you can have the best chances of gaining those extra funds!
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Whether you’re coming straight out of high school, are a transfer student, or are an adult student returning to college after a long absence, one of the first things you’ll want to do when preparing for college is to look for scholarships.
At all levels, college is expensive. Winning scholarships that cut down on costs is a priority for most of us, and writing an effective scholarship personal statement can help you do that.
There are many important parts of the process when it comes to scholarship applications. Locating the scholarships and gathering all the relevant information are key components, but your scholarship personal statement is arguably the most important part of a scholarship application.
Writing a powerful and memorable personal statement can really make your application stand out among the hundreds of other submissions.
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What Exactly Is a Scholarship Personal Statement?
A personal statement is pretty much exactly what it sounds like. It’s a statement, paragraph, or essay about yourself. It should tell who you are, where you came from, what your dreams, goals, and aspirations are, and more. It should focus on your strengths and tell scholarship committees why you deserve their money.
Sometimes, personal statements can be written in response to an open-ended question, such as, “ Tell us about yourself. ” More often, though, scholarship applications have a very specific prompt that you’re supposed to follow when writing your personal statement.
Following the Prompt
A prompt is something that many colleges or other types of scholarship committees will give you to help guide your writing. Some essays won’t have a prompt. We’ll discuss those later on in the article. For now, let’s focus on the applications that provide you with prompts.
When given a prompt, please stick to it and answer it fully. You don’t want to trail off onto some other tangent or write your statement how you want to write it simply because it sounds better or because you already have a standard scholarship personal statement you like to use. Answer the prompt that is given, and answer it honestly and completely.
Some prompts require you to respond to the questions asked in the order given, while for others ( most of them ), you can follow whatever order that suits you, so long as you address all questions.
Knowing about some common prompts beforehand will help prepare you for what you may be asked and will keep you from being blindsided. Knowing some common prompts early on can also prepare you a little more about what to write.
Common College Scholarship Personal Statement Prompts
1. why do you deserve this scholarship.
This is probably the most commonly asked prompt for any scholarship personal statement. Most organizations that give scholarships know why you want the scholarship. What they don’t know is why exactly they should give it to you. Your answer to this prompt should be one that fully answers the question by telling the scholarship committee not only why you deserve the money, but also why you need it at all.
Why you deserve something and why you need it are two totally different questions. This prompt, though, requires you to answer both. The reasons you need the scholarship money could involve a number of factors, including:
- Financial hardship in your family
- Coming from a single-parent or foster-parent home
- Older siblings already at college
- Parent(s) is disabled, out of work, or incarcerated
- Coming from a low-income family, neighborhood, or Title I school
- Receiving government assistance (housing, food stamps, etc.)
- Being a ward of the state with no support system
All of these reasons – and more – are why you might need the money. Tell the committee that in your scholarship personal statement.
Telling them these things should not be seen as “feeling sorry for yourself” or begging for help. These are all legitimate reasons you could potentially need help paying for college. As long as you’re being honest, these are definitely things that should be included in your personal statement.
Telling the committee why you deserve the scholarship is a little different. While all those reasons are why you need the money, they don’t explain why you deserve it. This is the part of the scholarship personal statement where you sell the committee on YOU.
Tell them about all the great things you’ve done. If you were an honor roll student, a member of the BETA Club or National Honor Society, or a National Merit Scholar, put that in your statement.
Other reasons you could cite as to why you deserve a scholarship include:
- Exceptional athletic ability or talent
- Many hours of documented community service
- Having served your country honorably in the military
- Impressive personal stories of overcoming adversity
- Exceptional ACT/SAT scores
- A schedule that shows an impressive balance of grades, sports, community service, etc.
Just as listing the reasons you need the scholarship isn’t begging, listing these reasons for deserving the scholarship isn’t bragging. There are hundreds, possibly even thousands, of people, trying to get the same scholarships you’re trying to get. You need to stand out above the crowd.
2. Tell us about overcoming your greatest challenge.
Although this prompt is worded quite differently from the first prompt, in essence, you can answer them both in a similar way. All of those reasons you might have for needing the money are also challenges you’ve had to overcome to succeed in life.
Other possible challenges could include the loss of parents, a physical or mental disability you’ve had to learn to cope with throughout your life, or a dangerous, scary, or upsetting life event you’ve lived through in your past.
For this type of prompt, you’ll want to start with the challenge you faced. Be as honest and descriptive as possible about what it was. Then be equally honest and descriptive about the steps you took to overcome it. If, after overcoming the challenge, you received some kind of recognition or award, make sure you mention that as well.
3. Why do you want to attend college?/Why is education important?
This is another very popular question that’s asked on scholarship applications. A scholarship committee wants to know that you have actual, obtainable goals for your education and your future before they give you money to use for college.
If you can’t effectively explain why college – and education in general – is important to your future goals, most committees won’t want to take a chance on you.
There are different ways to approach this particular prompt. If you fit into a category of people who have notoriously been excluded from higher education in the past, such as African Americans, women, or other minority groups, talking about that can help your case.
You can discuss how hard the generations that came before you fought for you to be able to attend college and how you want to honor that.
You can also take a wholly personal approach to answering this question. Mention any relevant struggles you’ve been through, and don’t be afraid to talk about your family. Did they go to college?
If not, discuss what an honor it’ll be to be the first in your family to graduate from college. Those types of things are all relevant reasons you might want to attend college.
No matter which way you decide to go with your answer to this question, don’t forget to talk about your goals and how college is the only way for you to achieve them in your scholarship personal statement.
Be specific. Talk about your intended major and how that major and the classes you’ll take for it will help you become what you want to become. If you’re applying for a college-specific scholarship, talk about why you want to go to that specific college.
4. Random and Unique Essay Prompts
Sometimes, no matter how hard you study and prep in order to write a good essay, a scholarship committee comes up with a personal statement essay prompt that seems like it’s entirely out of left field. These types of prompts can be anything.
For example, the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill has been known to ask students seeking scholarships in the past, “ What do you hope to find over the rainbow? ”. And for 2022/23, one of UNC’s application prompts required fill-in-the-blank type of responses, including:
- If I had an extra hour in every day, I would spend it…
- If I could travel anywhere, near or far, past, present or future, I would go…
- The last time I stepped outside my comfort zone, I…
The 2022/23 Yale-specific questions on the Coalition and Common App included the following short answer questions:
- You are teaching a new Yale course. What is it called?
- Yale’s residential colleges regularly host conversations with guests representing a wide range of experiences and accomplishments. What person, past or present, would you invite to speak? What would you ask them to discuss?
Another unusual prompt you might come across is “What would you do if you were a superhero?” .
There really isn’t a way to prepare for these types of prompts, but knowing they exist and that you might run across one is a good start.
For many people, these are the best kinds of prompts to receive. They give you a chance to let your imagination run wild, and they’re a nice change from the same old “Why do you deserve this scholarship?” type of questions.
So if you do happen to run across one of these, don’t immediately dismiss it. These types of prompts give you a chance to have a little fun. They are a chance to have your personality shine a little, and who knows- you might just impress the scholarship committee!
Writing Scholarship Personal Statements for Applications without Prompts
If you’re asked to write a personal statement but aren’t really given a prompt, simply tell the college a mixture of all those things listed above. Talk about your achievements, accomplishments, and instances of overcoming obstacles. Talk about your history, and tell them why you need the scholarship and why you deserve it.
There are also a few other Do’s and Don’ts to remember. Do be specific, but don’t get too complicated. Keep things simple and light, while also being thorough. Your personal statement is like a mini autobiography.
You want to highlight all the key points while putting a heavy emphasis on your strengths. You can mention a weakness, especially if you’ve learned to overcome that weakness, but don’t focus too much attention there.
Arrange your essay in a logical order that makes sense and flows well. Also, try to keep to one or two central themes throughout the entirety of the statement. Clear, concise personal statements are easily read and extremely memorable. Don’t be afraid to tell a story, though.
You never want to lie or exaggerate in your personal statement, but you should make it as interesting and as entertaining as possible while sticking to the facts.
Be very clear and precise about your goals and dreams. Don’t add in a lot of hypotheticals, maybes, or uncertainties. Scholarship committees want to know that you have a solid goal for your future.
They don’t want to give money to someone who might want to be an engineer and thinks botany is great but also really loves the idea of cosmetology and is just going to “stay undeclared until I figure it all out.” Umm…that’s an extreme example, perhaps, but you get the idea.
Don’t add in a lot of unnecessarily long words. Your personal statement should read like an actual story of your life, not a poorly written thesaurus. Trust us on this.
Scholarship committees will be much more impressed if you write an honest, well-organized, and coherent essay about yourself than they will if you find a way to use the words “ platitudinous ,” “ audacity ” and “ impecunious ” in your personal statement.
Also, avoid cliches and extremely long and wordy sentences.
Personal Statement Review: If you need help brainstorming or reviewing your essay, check our personal statement helper page.
Standard Scholarship Essay Format
The first thing you want to do when writing your scholarship personal statement is to set the formatting up correctly. Some scholarship applications will provide you with specific formatting requirements.
If not, the standard formatting requirements of a scholarship essay or personal statement are usually as follows:
- One-inch margins on all sides
- Double-spaced
- No additional line spaces between paragraphs
- Typed in Times New Roman
- Typed with 12-point font
Specific guidelines given in the scholarship instructions always supersede these formatting guidelines. Be sure to use proper grammar and punctuation. If these aren’t your strong points, ask a teacher, mentor, or friend to look over your essay for any errors.
You could also utilize this awesome spellcheck and online grammar check tool , or use any other that works for you.
After you’ve got the formatting correct, the next thing you want to do is put together your outline. This can be done on paper, on the computer, or just inside your head, but it does need to be done.
You need at least a loose outline to make sure your essay flows smoothly and makes sense as written. While the exact structure of your essay will depend largely on your own writing style and the essay prompt, here’s the general structure for most essays.
Step 1: Introduction
Your introduction should be no more than 2 paragraphs long, and you want to catch the reader with a very interesting and engaging first sentence. You should also outline the key points you’re going to be making in the remainder of your essay. If you were writing an English paper, this would be your thesis.
Step 2: Body Paragraphs
You should always have at least 2 body paragraphs, preferably 3. Remember, long paragraphs of text running together can be hard for readers to wade through and absorb, so try to keep your paragraphs to no more than 5 sentences if possible.
If you change topics, such as moving from talking about your family to talking about your strengths, you should also change paragraphs.
Your body paragraphs are where you really sell yourself as a great student with a lot of potential to the scholarship committee. Remember- be specific but simple!
Don’t get bogged down in big, thesaurus-like words, and avoid clichés. Just be honest about your life experiences, your accomplishments, and your future goals.
Step 3: Conclusion
In this last paragraph, you’ll want to sum up everything. This is also the paragraph where you talk about how much being awarded this particular scholarship would benefit you and what you would do with the money that will help you achieve your goals.
It’s also nice to thank the scholarship committee for taking the time to read through your application and consider you for the scholarship.
Scholarship Personal Statement Examples
Below you’ll find some examples of actual scholarship essays that were written by actual college students seeking scholarships. Some are examples of what to do, while others are examples of what not to do.
If you’re stuck and don’t know where to begin, hopefully, these will give you a little inspiration.
Sample Essay 1
“The day was May 28, 2014. My doctor told my parents that I would need Spinal Fusion Surgery with rods and screws, and it had to happen quickly. Before surgery, the doctor suggested strength training for the muscles in my back so that I’d recover faster. I immediately went to the local gym and began working with a personal trainer, Justin. I learned so much from him including how the body works and how surgery takes time to heal. After surgery, I knew that I wanted to use my experience to help others, just like Justin helped me.”
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This is an excellent example of an introductory paragraph for a scholarship personal statement. With the author’s first two sentences, I was hooked. This student knows how to immediately capture the reader’s attention and pull him into his story.
He’s relating a true story in response to a prompt asking him about his after-college plans, but he’s doing it in such a way that it’s instantly interesting, and engaging, and makes us want to read more.
The student also has a great transition sentence. Although we only provided a portion of the essay that stops just before he tells us exactly what his goals are, it’s obvious by the last displayed sentence that that’s exactly what he’s about to do.
He’s about to tell us his plans for his future, after already telling us why he chose those plans.
In just a few short sentences, this student catches our attention, tells us about a horrible thing that happened to him that he had to overcome, explains how that situation shaped what he wants to do with his future, and transitions into telling us his goals.
This is a masterfully crafted introductory paragraph.
Sample Essay 2
“Unlike other teens, I’m not concerned about money, or partying, or what others think of me. Unlike other eighteen-year-olds, I think about my future and haven’t become totally materialistic and acquisitive. My whole outlook on life changed after I realized that my life was just being handed to me on a silver spoon, and yet there were those in the world who didn’t have enough food to eat or place to live. I realized that the one thing that this world needed more than anything was compassion; compassion for those less fortunate than us.”
In contrast to example one, this sample section is an example of what not to do when writing your personal statement. It starts off badly and just keeps ongoing.
The first couple of sentences of this student’s essay don’t paint her in a great light because of how they’re written. It’s fine to tell the scholarship committee that you aren’t a partier and that you care about your future, but it’s not okay to do it while sitting in judgment of other people.
The very first words of this essay are “Unlike other teenagers.” This automatically sets the writer apart, which would be fine if she were going on to say something positive about “other teenagers.”
For instance, if she were to say that she didn’t grow up getting to socialize and spend time with friends because she was homeschooled her whole life or that she didn’t learn about the advantages of technology because she grew up in a rural community, her opening words would’ve been fine.
Instead, she immediately jumps into saying harsh, degrading things about “other teenagers.” She lumps all teenagers into a stereotypical group of irresponsible partiers who care only about their appearances and material things.
Casting other people in a bad light is never a great way to let your light shine in any arena, but this is especially true when trying to craft a strong college personal essay.
The transition to her revolutionary life moment didn’t make a lot of sense, either. She says her “whole outlook on life changed” after realizing there were poor people in the world. This is off-putting for 2 reasons.
The first is that most people, including children, know there are poor people in the world. It isn’t really a secret and doesn’t usually come as a life-changing shock.
Secondly, the way her essay is written, she says she never did those bad things that other teens did. Then she says her whole life changed when she realized there were poor people in the world.
As written, this makes it sound like she changed and started doing these things after her revelation, which is certainly not what she meant at all, but because of the chronology of her essay, that’s how it sounds.
Sample Essay 3
“And, that strength was something that came not only from knowing how to cook my own food, lug armfuls of wood three or four times a day, and make my own safe and cozy place in the world, no matter where. It came from an inner sense of seeing things as they are. Life isn’t just out of a magazine with the best appliances and the nicest furniture. There are other things in life, like dirty floors, and relationships that don’t always work, and meals that have to be made. But, that’s not all bad.”
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This is another example of an essay Don’t. The whole essay, which isn’t listed here, isn’t bad as a whole, but it also isn’t clear and precise. The sentences are long and wordy, and the student uses conjunctions, like “and” and “but,” to start sentences.
Grammatically, that isn’t the best way to write. This is an example of an essay that could have been quite good if only the student had spent some time editing it, proofreading it, and perhaps handing it over to someone else to look over it before he submitted it.
Never underestimate the power of revision and constructive criticism when writing your own scholarship essay.
Sample Essay 4
“Through the successes of my efforts, I also realized that poverty was just a societal limitation. I was low-income, not poor. I was still flourishing in school, leading faith-based activities, and taking an active role in community service. My low-income status was not a barrier but a launching pad to motivate and propel my success. […] Success is triumphing over hardships — willing yourself over anything and everything to achieve the best for yourself and your family. With this scholarship, I will use it to continue focusing on my studies in math and engineering, instead of worrying about making money and sending more back home. It will be an investment into myself for my family.”
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These are two paragraphs from the same essay, both excellently written. This student came from a very poor background and had to begin making money to help out their family at a very early age.
In this essay, the student does a great job of discussing hardships in the past in an honest, straightforward way that invites the reader’s admiration rather than pity.
The way he spends a brief amount of time talking about his hardships and then moving swiftly into how those hardships motivated him to want more from life is very well-done.
His conclusion paragraph is also spot-on. He acknowledges that the only way to overcome hardship is “willing yourself” to achieve. This shows that he has a willingness to work hard and experience to back it up.
He then goes on to tell how he’ll use the scholarship money if he receives it. He says that he’ll “invest into [him]self” and take this opportunity to work hard, even if it means he has to suffer financially for a few years, in order to achieve what he needs to achieve to ensure future financial success for both himself and his family.
This shows him to be a hard worker, someone caring and empathetic enough to put family first, and intelligent and enterprising.
These are all great things colleges want from prospective students, and he showcases these traits in himself without being overt or in-your-face about it.
Sample Essay 5
“To be able to hold onto your money you have to know how to manage it. Money management is a complicated process. As teenagers, we often have no idea how to manage money and we end up wasting a lot of it. But in a bad economy, most of us have had a crash course in what happens when you don’t manage your money properly. We have had to delve into a world foreign and unfamiliar to us and solve our own money problems. The most successful of us have managed to still have some semblance of a social life without going over our small budgets. The keys to doing this successfully are actually quite simple.”
The prompt for this particular essay was about managing money. In terms of staying on topic and having a good opening sentence, this writer did a really nice job.
The writer also makes the article very relatable because being a teenager and not knowing how to manage money is something most of us can remember quite easily.
In addition to being relatable, the first paragraph also holds our interest because it is easily read, not packed full of synonyms from the thesaurus, or written loftily.
The writer also does a great job with his “thesis” sentence. The last sentence of the paragraph is simple and straight to the point.
It lets us know what’s coming next; he’s about to list the keys to managing money successfully. This is a very well-organized introductory paragraph.
Where the writer falls short, though, is with his grammar. There are obvious run-on sentences and missing commas in that first paragraph. He also starts a sentence with a conjunction, which isn’t great as a general rule. The bad grammar and poor editing/proofreading take away from his entire paragraph, which otherwise would have been really good.
We’ve said it once, and we’re saying it again: Don’t skip the proofreading/editing stage ( fyi , we have great packages here to help with this ). If that isn’t something you’re good at doing, ask a teacher, mentor, friend, or loved one.
Grammar is important. You can have the best idea in the world, and bad grammar will keep people from hearing it because they’ll be too distracted by the errors.
When proofreading or editing for grammar, here are the most common questions to ask yourself:
- Did you write in complete sentences? (No fragments, run-ons, or comma splices)
- Did you run the paper through spellcheck and grammar check?
- Is all of your punctuation correct?
- Is it clear to whom or what your pronouns are referring?
- Are there any misplaced or dangling modifiers in your essay?
- Did you write in an active voice ?
- Are you being repetitive?
- Did you use the right word between commonly confused words ?
- Did you use proper subject/verb and noun/pronoun agreement throughout?
- Does your essay make logical, organized sense?
Before submitting your essay, edit through it using these questions as a guide.
Summing It All Up
The importance of writing a great, moving, and memorable scholarship personal statement cannot be overstated. Scholarship applications are uniform for all students.
Scholarship committee members are forced to read through the same types of information for all the students who apply. The one place you’re able to stand out and be creative is in your personal essay. That’s why it’s so important that you make it count.
A strong personal scholarship essay can be the tipping point between no money and lots and lots of money, so plan for it. Make time to do it right and edit it properly.
Consider it the most important part of your application process, and set aside the appropriate amount of time for drafting it, writing it, and editing it before the submission due date.
Finally, never be afraid to ask for help. Whether it’s an educator, parent, spouse, or friend, there is someone out there who wants to see you succeed. That person will be happy to help you craft the best possible scholarship personal statement.
How long should a scholarship essay be?
A scholarship essay should typically be between 500 to 1000 words. However, always adhere to any specific word limits set by the scholarship. If no limit is specified, aim for a concise essay within this range.
Focus on clear expression of ideas and experiences, and ensure to proofread for clarity and coherence. It’s more about quality than quantity.
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Hey! I'm in the process of applying for several scholarships and have noticed that many require a personal statement. I'm really aiming to make mine strong and impactful, but I'm unsure of what direction to take.
What elements should a personal statement have to make it memorable and effective? Is there a specific structure I should follow, or certain experiences that are best to highlight? I would greatly appreciate any tips or examples from those who have succeeded with their personal statements. Thank you so much!
Creating a compelling personal statement for scholarships involves careful thought, planning, and crafting. Your personal statement should paint a picture of you as a person, student, and potential scholarship recipient.
Firstly, your personal statement should introduce you and your academic interests clearly. Make it relatable and genuine. If possible, start your personal statement with an intriguing anecdote that relates to your chosen field of study or passion.
Next, be specific about where your interests lie and how you have pursued them so far. This could involve details of academic projects, extracurricular activities, or work experiences that have influenced your career ambitions.
One approach is the STAR method (Situation, Task, Action, Result): start by noting the situation, explain the task you had to carry out, describe the action you took to accomplish it, and talk about the results or what you learned from the experience.
While you shouldn't shy away from discussing your achievements, also highlight your growth and how you have overcome challenges. Discuss how each experience has advanced your knowledge, skills, understanding, and career aspirations.
The concluding part of your personal statement should articulate your future goals and how the scholarship will assist you in achieving them. Address your plans and aspirations, showing how the scholarship aligns with these goals.
Remember to keep the tone professional yet personal, and ensure your statement is well-structured and free of grammatical errors.
Finally, for the personal statement to be effective, it needs to be true to you. Be sincere and honest about your experiences and aspirations. It's important to showcase your individuality and personality, as this helps you stand out from the crowd.
For example, if you're applying for a scholarship in computer science, you could talk about a specific coding project you were part of, how you contributed to it, the skills you gained, and how these are laying the foundation for your future career.
While it's not a one-size-fits-all, these general formats should guide you in presenting a compelling narrative.
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